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Teen Poetry #9
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m48
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since 2009-12-02
Posts 108
0 posted 2009-12-15 02:28 PM


Bloody red drops
stained clouds in the skys
thinking of you makes me
so very high

clouds of green
skys of gray
hoping you will never go away

love fails to see the lies
when your friends try to be
so wise

and thats how young love dies
when there are red tear drops
in the skys
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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
1 posted 2010-01-09 12:26 PM

Hi Tes!

I'm Christine and I like your poem. It's pretty cool though a bit sad.

“All bad poetry springs from genuine feeling.”--Oscar Wilde
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