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minitechie
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since 2008-05-26
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california

0 posted 2009-12-15 01:41 PM



Life is always changing
People come and go
Life must continue
The show must go on!

People are people
Cold, ignorant, and confused.
Life itself seems to dull
Even to a dull loving man.
Unfortunatly everyone knows
The show must go on.

Love is said to never fail
Love is simply lies
and vicious heartbreaking emotions
Love fails my friends
The show must go on.

Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter.

© Copyright 2009 Cheyenne Ewald - All Rights Reserved
m48
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since 2009-12-02
Posts 108

1 posted 2009-12-15 02:19 PM


huh...where did this come from?what inspired you?


ps would you mind giving me some feedback?m48

ThatOneGuy
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since 2009-10-27
Posts 33
Indiana, United States
2 posted 2009-12-15 03:59 PM


i am curious what the inspiration to this was too but i like it, and i think it's good!
minitechie
Junior Member
since 2008-05-26
Posts 23
california
3 posted 2009-12-16 02:14 PM


im glad someone asked about the inspration of this particular poem.


The last stanza is the main focus. everyone was telling me not to date this one guy that i was madly head over heels for and he told me he was falling for me and we started going out. well i should have listened to the people who told me about him. he hurt me pretty bad and i wish i could still have him to say "i love you" to. I miss him, and everything about him.

Harlequin's Queen and Diablo's Daughter.

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