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two men & black trench coat.
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two men & black trench coat. |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
~honest critques on this please&thank you~ two men by my side i call upon you both now take these words an do what you will but i must confess this is my deal you both have a place in my heart i love you both apart diffrent then just a year ago now i see you for you dont get me wrong i love whats here harder to explain then i thought i continue i talk to you at night as see him in days light though paths cross frequently no one looks suspiciously at the situation thinking is ok driving me crazy i fight a fight daily loving two men not the same way i said to one youre like a brother to the other i said something else like those three little words so seriously i spoke now i put my black trench coat on wrap it tight around my heart leaving only these words to let you swim in honestly these are my feelings take them leave them i dont care just listen to them please |
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watchingsummer New Member
since 2009-12-13
Posts 8USA |
i know how you feel, great poem. i loved how you used the black trench coat as a metaphor. "If I know what love is, it is because of you." -Hermann Hesse |
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