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the past that shapes the future
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the past that shapes the future |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK 
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Despite your refusal to acknowledge this, Our relationship has been forever changed. You may attempt to ignore the bruised past, But it determines how the future is arranged. When you again, sob down the phone to me, I feel a bizarre emotion begin to arise. No longer one of anger and disappointment, More one that is bored of your cries. As my mother you should demand respect, And Yet, You wallow in self pity, you beg for my attention, You expect my full forgiveness, and ask for my corrections. You are unable to function "adequately" And I feel perhaps I should have more sympathy, But I face this task with immense difficulty, As i think of my future without you, so positively. This year, I love you more than last year, Not quite as much as a few years before that, But surely not as much as next year. Our love is complicated, but conquers most. From where I stand it's simple, I will love you forever and a day. But until you drop that bottle, To you, I have nothing left to say. Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
I know it's a bit rough, but i've been out of the game for a while haha. Really hope everyone is doing well though, Merry Christmas to all though Belinda~* Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I think your message is coming out loud and clear, and Belinda, I am sure there are many in those shoes. I will hope it just gets better for them. |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Bellz!! it's sooo sooo good to have you back!!.. your work is great as always.. Your message comes across loud and clear!!.. Merry Christmas. |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
nicly written.good story exicution and attention to detail. ps ive been out of the game for a while too and am looking to get feed back as well just look for any thing written by m48 thanks! |
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