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Nov 29 2009
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Nov 29 2009 |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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Briefly I slide back Into the world of babydolls and teddy bears But I cannot stay long Adulthood pulls too strongly And I am forced to go along I've memorized the words To my favorite childhood songs But they mean less and less As time sprints on And with it I am forced to run I want to go back to the beginning Like when I was first with you When I was first *with* you I was so naive... Such a blessed time Take me back To that time Love me as the child I was For a time Hold me, Kiss me, Please me Forget Time It means nothing to us And we nothing to it |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I enjoyed this - as I am probably old enough to be your Grandmother, and trust me, I have my entire life continued to enjoy the child in me. I hope I never stop. No one should deny themselves the joy of their child within. Nicely written. |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
I enjoyed this poem very much so, I think the theme is one that is written about quite a lot, yet you captured it well. "I've memorized the words To my favorite childhood songs But they mean less and less As time sprints on And with it I am forced to run" - forced to choose i think this is my favourite stanza, the idea of the childhood songs is in fact one that I have thought about before. Very well written, I did enjoy reading this. Missed reading you work! Belinda~* Expect nothing, Prepare for anything. |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
oh wow that all i can mutter. the words played on my lips.it was wonderful.nicly written. |
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