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MadMarcus
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since 2009-11-25
Posts 25
Sweden, Solna
0 posted 2009-12-02 04:21 PM


I really hate the word Good Bye.

Becuse when you say it my heart cries.

When your not by my side my soul dies.

My mind hurts becuse of the lies.

You said you only want to be friends, i said thats okey.

But when evry inch of my body want to scream NO WAY!

I love you and i will always do so dont go away.

Please i dont want to lie.

Dont say Good Bye.
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m48
Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108
1 posted 2009-12-03 06:06 PM

i totally understand.that poem pulled at memories.great job in expressing those feelings.

ps please read my poem, its written by m48 thats me.
MadMarcus
Junior Member
since 2009-11-25
Posts 25
Sweden, Solna
2 posted 2009-12-04 05:29 PM

Thanks ^^ I´m happy that you understand what i´m trying to say with this poem<3
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