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Teen Poetry #9

My lonely marble

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

0 posted 2009-11-20 07:31 PM

There's twisted teal,
Trapped in
A small sphere;
A slave.

It rolls and rolls; alone,

Stumbling
Across stiff stone,
Very slowly,
Very fast,
It seems, all the same.

Silent it waits,
Anxious
To make an escape,
To roll, and roll,

And roll, Away!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

Stitches
Member

since 2009-11-27

Posts 159
United Kingdom

1 posted 2009-11-30 10:32 AM

Nice double meaning.

Also...

I like marbles.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

m48
Member

since 2009-12-02

Posts 108

2 posted 2009-12-03 06:09 PM

that was oddly cute and i get it.nicly expressed.

ps please read a poem by m48 thats me.im new,sorta.

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