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renamed secret idenity
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
please note this is a simular poem to another written on this very forum but i am the same writer and i just wanted to make this poem my first under my new name thats all. its been a year past now comming upon the second winter of your company though still a well kept secret you swim inside me only i know your idenity thats what you asked of me the time and things we have shared echo in my heart when i dream i see your face it works keeping the nightsmares and evil things at bay you are stronger now then before sharing more i love you this way open not like a book or novel but a secret just for me sweetest of dreams my dark angel youre enough light for me [This message has been edited by m48 (12-03-2009 03:04 PM).] |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
i like the storyline, but it seemed to mislead me a bit, tricky tricky, your poem is a ninja |
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m48 Member
since 2009-12-02
Posts 108 |
thank you! but how did my poem mis lead you? |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
it liked changed topics for a second but then got back on subject |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Welcome to Passions, I hope you find yourself a lot of poetic friends here. Please check your email for a special welcome from us here.  Mysteria |
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