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Teen Poetry #9

You Won't See Me Cry

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2009-11-24 07:53 PM

it's a song, so idk how the rhythm sounds but the music is semi pretty...kinda. :/

I’m not gunna cry
What you say can’t hurt me
I won’t show weakness
I promise you won’t see

You can beat me down
You can say the worse
I won’t fight back
I won’t curse

But one thing that I can guarantee
The one thing I promise you won’t see

You won’t see me cry
You won’t see me break
I’m not gunna show my weakness
My footing will not shake

I won’t allow the tears
To run down my reddened cheek
You won’t see me cry
That I guarantee

It may be tough
And I may be tender
But that doesn’t mean
That I’ll ever surrender

Give it your best shot
‘cause I’m not fighting back
I’m taking the high road
And not turning back

And one thing that I can guarantee
One thing I promise you won’t see

You won’t see me cry
You won’t see me break
I’m not gunna show my weakness
My footing will not shake

I won’t allow the tears
To run down my reddened cheek
You won’t see me cry
That I guarantee

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

1 posted 2009-11-25 12:17 PM

Really good... i'd love to hear it with music.

Loved it!! Keep up the magic!!

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2009-11-25 04:39 PM

thanks!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

3 posted 2009-11-26 06:59 AM

i really liked this one!
and im with madelyn - id love to hear it with the music

-Lee

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