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Starry Night |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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Okay so the last stanza sucks but eh I was describing what it looked like outside tonight. :P Enjoy? Suspended on the wires and strings The stars in milky white Dripping tears to a waiting world Falling through the black night Scattered; they plot the midnight sky Like fireflies hidden in the leaves They dance in a sea of charcoal Doing the stroke as the weave Suspended on their wires and strings They monitor the sleeping below High among the clouds and moon They stay softly aglow |
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Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
nooo i like the last stanza just as it is  |
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