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Teen Poetry #9

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madelyn
Member

since 2009-09-03

Posts 172
Purgatory

0 posted 2009-11-04 04:09 AM

Last year I was afraid to lose you.
Last month I lost you.
Last week I cried for you.
Yesterday I was getting over you.
Today I am over you.
Today you lost me.
Next week you will cry for me.
Next month you will beg me.
Next year you will die for me.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2009-11-04 04:16 AM

LOVE THIS.. As for a title.. tell me it's horrible if u like lol but

"All Thats Left Of Yesterday, Last Week, Last Month, Last Year"

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2009-11-04 01:21 PM

Yesterday Is Now Tomorrow

precious pearls
Member

since 2009-07-24

Posts 110
NJ; United States

3 posted 2009-11-11 04:49 PM

Losing the People You Love

btw, great poem!

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

4 posted 2009-11-11 05:01 PM

I love this poem. The simplicity and honesty of it. Many girls who ignored me; this is what happened with me. They lost me.

As for a title:

"You came, you saw, you left."

Mas814
Junior Member

since 2009-11-13

Posts 15
NY (not nyc)

5 posted 2009-11-13 06:50 PM

Really to the point. And so true, if i were to name it, it would be
Closing the Door

Rosie_Orange
Junior Member

since 2009-04-20

Posts 46
South Africa

6 posted 2009-11-17 04:56 AM

i really liked the idea!!
maybe could've used a few more descriptions?

title:

YOU

Lost girl..

Find me?

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