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madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory

0 posted 2009-11-04 04:09 AM


Last year I was afraid to lose you.
Last month I lost you.
Last week I cried for you.
Yesterday I was getting over you.
Today I am over you.
Today you lost me.
Next week you will cry for me.
Next month you will beg me.
Next year you will die for me.


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RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 2009-11-04 04:16 AM


LOVE THIS.. As for a title.. tell me it's horrible if u like lol but

"All Thats Left Of Yesterday, Last Week, Last Month, Last Year"

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2 posted 2009-11-04 01:21 PM


Yesterday Is Now Tomorrow
precious pearls
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since 2009-07-24
Posts 110
NJ; United States
3 posted 2009-11-11 04:49 PM


Losing the People You Love

btw, great poem!

Ravagence
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since 2009-08-16
Posts 79

4 posted 2009-11-11 05:01 PM


I love this poem. The simplicity and honesty of it. Many girls who ignored me; this is what happened with me. They lost me.

As for a title:

"You came, you saw, you left."

Mas814
Junior Member
since 2009-11-13
Posts 15
NY (not nyc)
5 posted 2009-11-13 06:50 PM


Really to the point. And so true, if i were to name it, it would be
Closing the Door

Rosie_Orange
Junior Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 46
South Africa
6 posted 2009-11-17 04:56 AM


i really liked the idea!!
maybe could've used a few more descriptions?

title:

YOU

Lost girl..

Find me?

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