A Diminished Love (Kind of Silly)

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Teen Poetry #9

A Diminished Love (Kind of Silly)

UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2009-10-26 11:02 AM

Sad as it may be,
my love of high heels
has diminished.

I'm still fine with wearing them.
With giving myself
the challenge
of staying upright
in heels.

I love how they
make me taller
and make me feel
so sexy,
but my love of them
has diminished.

Why? Why?
I still love to wear them
and feel like
I'm dancing when I'm walking.
I love the sway
they give me.

But on other people
they just sometimes
suck.

Honestly,
It's a little hard
to love something
inanimate,
that slices open your
foot!

(I was at Homecoming dance on saturday and my friend accidentally jumped on my foot and sliced it open with her high heeled shoe. OUCH!!!)

Sunshine

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Posts 63354
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1 posted 2009-10-26 06:53 PM

Sorry, but I'm smiling at this. First, as to critique, I would suggest not placing a disnomer of (kind of silly) when it really isn't! Truth is, it's a learning lesson! Heels are only for men, anyway. I can't remember a time [in heels] that I was ever comfortable with fashion. Not that I'm in flat shoes always; but good grief...ask a man to do just that and they wouldn't even get married! LOL...

Have a good one. I enjoyed...up to the point of the point in your foot!

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