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Twisted Morn |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Stars I see in morning sky Moon above shining high Crooked bats, flying sly Hurling moor breeze passing by The pastors new, the shallow dew This glistening dew, but morning few The faltering sky, now still to die Once so blue, high my thoughts flew Now greying clouds, thunder loud Then silver lining on these found Musical were those things of sound Now shrill sounds to all I'm boumd Sunlight how it filled my days Now I see is piercing rays Filtering through the building tall None it is reach my pitiful hall Tender posies I see in mind Now wilted petals is all I find None there to take my side No breeze , no scent to show me and guide All these things I see at dawn What a pity! Not a single fawn Others left I feel forlorn Now new feel inside me born Now all these things from me shy I see night in morning, oh my! |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I do hope, dear pryanka, that in the meantime things improved for you. This was a beautiful poem, though sad. Love, Margherita |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Thank you so much Margherita! I'm perfectly fine now  I was trying to change my name in my previous poems the way Ron had suggested! Thats why the previous post. I'm glad you liked it |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
I TOTALLLY LOVEEED IT |
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