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"she was all that" really dont care wether you like it or not
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"she was all that" really dont care wether you like it or not |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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screw it all i just want to fight or drink and sing and stay up all night till my stomache bleeds from an ulcer that eats the lining of my life but i dont really matter im the one you throw aside and when other people come around you somehow have to hide cant be seen with me cant be one of them cant be who you are because your just too bent i wanna scream everything youve ever said i wanna write it on the mirror and then take away your wheel because without it you cant steer crash and burn id laugh and laugh and say "yup she WAS all that" |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
I actually like this.. You've always been an amazing writer.. Ur brillance never ceases to amaze me.. I've said it once.. so i'll say it again.. You're going to change the world some day, one word, one stanza, one poem at a time! |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I agree with Jess.  You are really good at this. Because you write in your own style. Your don't try to restrict yourself in some rules just to make your poem great. Keep on writing. -Zach |
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prachi New Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 1india |
wow...itz amazing...u can actually c urself in d guy's place feeling lyk he z n doing wat he wishes he could do... gud work...keep on writing... prachi |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
this is one of the poem Bryan used to write....!!!! WOW loved this! Krysti |
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