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freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
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0 posted 2009-01-18 08:03 PM



This is probably not one of my best poems, but i've been having writer's block lately, and i can't write anything good at the moment. Just tell me what you think

What is this fear?
That keeps me back
Holding me
Squeezing me
It's suffocating
To know
The cause
To know it's fear
That gently
Whispers
In my ear
That tugs my heart
Pulling
And pulling
And its pulse
Beats so much faster
The grasp
It has on me
This fear
What has it taken?
For everything
Every hope
Every dream
Now breaking
This feeling
To be afraid
This fear
That keeps me awake
Yet nightmares
Only nightmares
Still haunting
Still squeezing
Suffocating
Until I scream
Only to haunt me
Once again
And forevermore
This fear
What is this?


With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

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