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flyinwiild New Member
since 2009-10-07
Posts 9 |
you spoke your words, i spoke the same, you said my words were wrong. you let go, then i did too, you claimed i was at fault. you dont listen, so i dont listen, you say im the only one. you live your life so i live mine, but you still hold me down. so you gave up, but i gave in, you'll always blame this girl. i walk away, and you can't follow, now you face the mirror. -bridge |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
First off, when it says "bridge", does this refer to a song? Possibly a song that you might be working on? If so, then I hope to see the rest of it! :] As for the piece itself: I like how it hints at the problem, but doesn't explicitly state it. I get the general idea from the writing, but I'm left to my own conclusion. The flow was fairly simple, but then again, if its part of a song, its 'cause I don't know how it should really sound. Thanks for sharing! There is power in the pen. |
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