I don't like how you treat her.

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Teen Poetry #9

I don't like how you treat her.

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

0 posted 2009-10-05 04:10 PM

I don't like it when you talk about her like that,
Talking about how much you want to bang her:

How much you want her in your arms.

Your not who she needs;
she needs someone to keep her safe:

How much of a person like that are you?

She's sensitive and doesn't need someone all over her,
She needs someone to give her space:

Someone to listen.

I'm going to tell you to go away,
you in-sensitive person:

Don't dare go near any girl until you can be nice.

Women are toys,
Not even close:

They are

sensitive
beautiful
fragile.

Something you can't handle yet,
don't hit them:

Don't hurt 'em either.

Or you'll have to deal with me,
and thousands of guys who feel the same way.

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

1 posted 2009-10-05 04:28 PM

nice thoughts...
Don't know why some of them are so perverted!
you put it across well...

"Women are toys,
Not even close:

They are

sensitive
beautiful
fragile"

I liked that a lot...so true...wish everyone felt that way!

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2009-10-05 09:11 PM

Women are to be respected and heard. Lol, unless you (us) men (boys) no longer wish to have children... >.<

There is power in the pen.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2009-10-06 02:27 PM

Enjoyed... how very true...

oh and yes Andrew put nicely... no children... lol

Krysti

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