Teen Poetry #9 |
in the library we meet/ or if someone has a good title make suggestions plz |
maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
In the library I came up to you We started a Conversation We made eye contact But when We stopped talking You just Kept on Staring at me I stared back at You Looking deeply Into your brown Chocolate eyes It seemed like I was melting away But I had to break The reticence away Because it made me Feel timorous My heart just Palpitating away The way our hands Touched unexpectedly The way you stared at me Made me feel apprehensive It was just both of us together People mistook us for a couple And I even got more shy It felt inconvenient It felt uncomfortable But now these feelings Are perplexed And inexplicable To comprehend Its rigorous To constrain Since I don’t Know what im feeling Inside But all I know is that This was the best moment I ever had with you |
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Ravagence Member
since 2009-08-16
Posts 79 |
Visual Conflict? Overflowing Stare? I dunno what to call it other than amazing, gifted, perfect, and did I say amazing? |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
thankk u |
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