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Teen Poetry #9

Forever and The End

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-01-18 02:26 AM

Just a little something i whipped up when i was to bored to sleep. Hope it makes sense.

Beaten down and broken,
tired of all this hate.
Remember the words that were spoken,
because it's never too late.

Torn down and fading,
sick of every lasting breath.
Try to keep down the volume,
at life I'm doing my best.

There's nothing like a problem,
to get you through the day.
This never ending autumn,
wont leave the world this way.
[forever]

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-01-18 10:10 AM

"Try to keep down the volume,
at life I'm doing my best."

only be quiet when you have to!
otherwise, make a lot of noise through life and live it. It happens fast, enjoy every minute you can

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-01-18 10:51 AM

"Remember the words that were spoken,
because it's never too late."

For some strange reason I liked that part. hehe. This is pretty good considering you were bored while writing. lol

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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