Teen Poetry #9 |
Shadows Creeping In The Night |
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Not my best work guys. Criticism is welcome. Shadows Creeping In The Night. Nothing more then a fake Just another mistake Guilt holding me by the throat suffocating me till my final breath. Constricted by the truth Falling under neath all my lies Wishing to wake up for this coma Numb by the morphine lies I feel like I can't hold on Slowly losing my grip Drowning into sorrow Praying to find my light Sunlight has left my world Now the Moon has its control Shadow hiding in the back of my mind What happen to my once long beckon? Lost in the shadows And guilt is at my throat Please God help be my light Because I can't find it on my own.. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
awww...zach...to me this is one of your best. i really like it. especially the last stanza, it's really strong. great job!!! library. ?ul!@nn@ |
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