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Teen Poetry #9
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madelyn
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since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory
0 posted 2009-09-22 05:13 AM


I
Try
I
Try
I
Try
To remember you
Ever giving me
The Hint

The one that tell that person
That “no I don’t want to be your friend”

But
As I draw out every memory
That we have shared
No matter how painful
It is
I can’t
None
Zero
Zilch

We were happy
I was happy
You looked happy
But what would I know
Oh yeah
alot.
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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-09-22 06:39 AM

~smiling~

I can see the poet in you already~~

M
freeand2sexy
Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
2 posted 2009-09-22 10:24 PM

I enjoyed reading this, and it also made me smile.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.
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