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My Shattered Heart
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My Shattered Heart |
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madelyn Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172Purgatory |
Please note~ This is about my best friend stabbing me in the back not about suicide. What the hell Did you do To my heart? It once beat freely Free as a humming bird It once was warm Warm even in ice It once loved everything Loved even the face of hatred It was beautiful Even when it tried To be ugly It once glowed Pink and cute Now it’s dead Black and blue and red From where you punctured it Now it is ugly Even when it tries to be pretty Now it is cold Colder than ice Now it’s stopped dead Silence fills my chest Why the hell Would you do this To some you loved? |
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Ravagence Member
since 2009-08-16
Posts 79 |
Although I'm quite hot today, your beautiful, artistic, amazing piece has managed to send shivers down my back. No matter how many times I read it I get the same feeling, like the words are what now contains your anger. I love your work. I really want to read more like this. |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
Nice one... I liked the part "What the hell did you do to my heart?" "It was once warm warm even in ice" I liked it a lot... This back stabbing makes it so hard to trust someone! |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
i liked it alot  keep up the good work |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Love it. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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frencesmae New Member
since 2011-01-07
Posts 9philippines |
good poem |
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