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Teen Poetry #9

For all that's left of Yesterday, We're Everybody's Fools

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-09-20 08:44 PM

Dear Daddy,
I just want you to know,
I don't blame you.
I don't think this is all your fault.
And I know you love me too.

But Daddy you make me sad,
We're so much alike you know,
I'm not a thing like Mom..
at least I wish I wasn't.

I know you're hurting too,
and I can feel your pain.
But we'll always be together,
even when you're far away.

I know the choice you made was good,
so why can't I stop the tears?
Daddy I'm just a little confused,
why now, after all these years?

I just can't stand knowing
that you go through as much as me.
It hurts so much to know
you feel you wont ever be free.

{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
{~~*~~}

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (09-21-2009 08:33 PM).]

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2009-09-21 02:29 AM

WOW!.. i feel this soo much atm... i really do..

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2009-09-21 10:39 PM

I'm glad you can relate.
Thanks for reading hun

{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
{~~*~~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2009-09-22 09:48 PM

Emily I just wanna go right through the screen and give you a massive hug.

This was really good considering you don't usually rhyme.

-Zach

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2009-09-22 11:11 PM

Ha, thanks Zach.

EmilyTheStrange
{~~*~~}
...popsicle!

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