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Teen Poetry #9

The Rope To My Freedom

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2009-09-18 06:43 PM

(An attempt to free my writer's block.)

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reaching,grasping,wanting help,rope,needing help,freedom,peace,love,joy

I wish I could tell you
everything I've ever experienced.
I wish I could tell you my life,
and hold your hand through it all.

There were times I was dead and alone,
and I had no one to run to.
I was left with the pain of regret,
and all I wanted was to escape.

I got out of my pit though,
I grabbed the rope
and I pulled myself to freedom.
I helped myself get better.

I found a happy-medium.
A place where I belong.
I'm still not used to it,
because I need the finishing piece.

I need someone to hold me,
to talk to me when I'm sad.
I need you to realize
what place you hold [in my heart].

julianna

everyone's normal [until you get to know them]

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

1 posted 2009-09-22 10:36 PM

This was great, and it flowed so well.

There wasn't a part I didn't like.

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

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