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rebelangelv
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0 posted 2009-01-17 06:19 PM



In the darkness
The light of my past
There is none but one light
But I cannot go back.
Through this abyss
The blackness engulfs
The spilling of blood
The ending of a pulse
The future is baron
One I don't want to see
The slipping goes unnoticed
No one loves me
Heart of love is replaced
By the thick heart of stone
But you still manage to break it
Emotions overthrown
The one that you stay with
The one of you life
Is speaking the prophecy:
You are going to die
I go before you
As the darkness overcomes
But I go where you shall not
I'm in the sun
The light of my past
Has long been blown out
Only one can rekindle it
But are long gone, on your way to hell

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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1 posted 2009-01-18 11:50 AM


Great description. Really kept me at the edge of my seat. hehe Keep up the good work!

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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