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Teen Poetry #9

DIE MISERY DIE

Elias Nevermore
Member

since 2007-11-03

Posts 152

0 posted 2009-09-08 12:43 PM

The poor man lies beaten
having not eaten
for a week.

His pockets lay empty,
like so other many
of the poor.

The street is his domain,
laden with rain
and rats.

His clothes are muddied,
his face sullied.
No complaints.

Men died out there daily,
survive long rarely.
Cruel world.

But to him this is life,
and he will fight
to keep it.

"Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there wondering, fearing,
Doubting, dreaming dreams no mortals ever dared to dream before;" -Edgar All

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2009-09-08 02:40 AM

This is quite good. Thank you for sharing it.

Alison

Ravagence
Member

since 2009-08-16

Posts 79

2 posted 2009-09-10 04:14 PM

I got the chills,
Not the bad ones,
The good ones

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2009-09-10 07:44 PM

a very touchy subject not many people dare to go. loved how you went there. great way of portraying the meaning.
Krysti

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