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Just not today...
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Just not today... |
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Shadowdusk New Member
since 2009-09-07
Posts 7 |
Just not today... Don't ask peace of me Just not today... Don't ask hope of me Just not today... Don't seek no wisdom from a broken man If you can't move on, I sure can. Don't ask of me To be a mountain Not without her... Don't ask of me To carry the world Not without her... Don't seek strength From a broken man, When in my own strength I ain't too sure. I know I told you Whenever you'd call I'd be there to break your fall To lend you a hand, To help you stand, To make you believe That it's gonna be okay. To wipe your tears, Chase away your fears But I just can't Just not today You're just gonna have to Find your own way. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You thought this through very well and I like how you constructed the poem. Good job and welcome to PiP. Alison |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow the ending was sooo good def. my favorite part. the beginning didnt flow as nice i thought but very nice story behind this. »Great write Krysti |
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