navwin » Main Forums » Teen Poetry #9 » Dont let me fall Let me fly
Teen Poetry #9
Post A Reply Post New Topic Dont let me fall Let me fly Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
madelyn
Member
since 2009-09-03
Posts 172
Purgatory

0 posted 2009-09-03 08:04 AM


Dont let me fall
Dont let me fall into the river
Dont let me drown in my own sorrow
Dont let me fall down in self-pity
Dont let me look into the mirror and see a stranger
Dont let me go into the darkness
Dont let me feel alone


Let me fly
Let me fly into space
Let me float in happiness
Let me fly in joy
Let me look in the mirror and love what i see
Let me into the sun
Let me feel loved


Why is the "dont's" how i feel like now? Oh yeah i am a TEENAGER!! I HATE IT!!


© Copyright 2009 MEA - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-09-03 10:11 AM


" Oh yeah i am a TEENAGER!! I HATE IT!!" made me smile because I understand you...

You are doing fine expressing yourself

M

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Main Forums » Teen Poetry #9 » Dont let me fall Let me fly

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary