Teen Poetry #9 |
just friends? (plz give me advice) |
notadaygoesby New Member
since 2009-01-14
Posts 4 |
she once said she liked me and that was all i needed. But another came along and she was torn between us it made me feel defeated. for i love her but to her im just a friend man oh man i want that to end! He came and then he left but liking me she forgot. she could not tell it her that i sought. for i love her but to her im just a friend man oh man i want that to end! saturday flies by and to her its no different. i cant be anymore patient! plz feel free to give me advice |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
well first of all i know how you feel, and even tho it's a crappy feeling there are worse ones. It's not a great situation to be in, but maybe you should try showing this person this poem. Or write one for them and give it to them. That's one way. Or you could just straight out tell her. Hopefully everything works out. {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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freeand2sexy Senior Member
since 2008-09-12
Posts 704CA, USA |
I've been in a similar situation, so i know it sucks. i liked a guy who liked me until another girl came into the picture, all i can say, is Emily is right maybe you need to show her how you feel, whether its through a poem or some other way. There are many ways but choose one (the right way for you) and let her know. in my situation i didn't do anything and i lost him, maybe that was the way it was meant to be but now i'm left wondering what would have been different. Even if it doesn't work out the way you want it to, at least you won't be stuck like me, wondering and regeting With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
really good. needs some work. but all in all i liked it a lot only a vampire can love you forever. |
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i3n07red12 New Member
since 2009-01-27
Posts 6Brunei |
hey honestly your smart,the way your poem rymes i like it,and maybe i like it coz it happens to me now..anyway nice work.. |
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NicoleRocker12367 Junior Member
since 2009-01-07
Posts 12MA, United States |
Well I'm sure if you told her she could tell u if she likes you or not and if she don't then oh well too bad u will need a new girl. I have a similar problem in my poem crush. P.S I am a girl so I should be good at advice on this. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Well I wrote a poem exactly like this. So yeah. I know the feeling. If you really want to get anywhere good in this situation is to tell her. That's just my little advice. Take it or leave it. Doesn't matter to me. hope things go well. -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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