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notadaygoesby
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since 2009-01-14
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0 posted 2009-01-14 11:15 PM



she once said she liked me
and that was all i needed.
But another came along and she was torn between us
it made me feel defeated.

for i love her but to her im just a friend
man oh man i want that to end!

He came and then he left
but liking me she forgot.
she could not tell
it her that i sought.

for i love her but to her im just a friend
man oh man i want that to end!

saturday flies by and to her its no different.
i cant be anymore patient!

plz feel free to give me advice

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2009-01-15 09:24 PM


well first of all i know how you feel, and even tho it's a crappy feeling there are worse ones. It's not a great situation to be in, but maybe you should try showing this person this poem. Or write one for them and give it to them. That's one way. Or you could just straight out tell her. Hopefully everything works out.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}


freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
CA, USA
2 posted 2009-01-15 09:51 PM


I've been in a similar situation, so i know it sucks. i liked a guy who liked me until another girl came into the picture, all i can say, is Emily is right maybe you need to show her how you feel, whether its through a poem or some other way.

There are many ways but choose one (the right way for you) and let her know. in my situation i didn't do anything and i lost him, maybe that was the way it was meant to be but now i'm left wondering what would have been different.

Even if it doesn't work out the way you want it to, at least you won't be stuck like me, wondering and regeting


With God I am happy; sadness has no say in my life.

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
3 posted 2009-01-16 07:04 PM


really good. needs some work. but all in all i liked it a lot

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

i3n07red12
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since 2009-01-27
Posts 6
Brunei
4 posted 2009-01-28 01:05 PM


hey honestly your smart,the way your poem rymes i like it,and maybe i like it coz it happens to me now..anyway nice work..
NicoleRocker12367
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since 2009-01-07
Posts 12
MA, United States
5 posted 2009-01-28 05:25 PM


Well I'm sure if you told her she could tell u if she likes you or not and if she don't then oh well too bad u will need a new girl. I have a similar problem in my poem crush. P.S I am a girl so I should be good at advice on this.

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6 posted 2009-01-28 05:35 PM


Well I wrote a poem exactly like this. So yeah. I know the feeling. If you really want to get anywhere good in this situation is to tell her. That's just my little advice. Take it or leave it. Doesn't matter to me. hope things go well.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

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