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Teen Poetry #9

''But Not You''

i3n07red12
New Member

since 2009-01-27

Posts 6
Brunei

0 posted 2009-01-28 12:54 PM

''BUT NOT YOU''

Im crying here in these lonely room of mine,
Remembering the moment when You and I,
This heart what they called,
Is no longer a heart anymore,
It broke into pieces,
That no one could ever bring it back,
The way it was before..

If only You know,
You're a heaven sent that makes me happy,
And the devil's gift that makes me sad,
But Im glad You came,
Coz its better for me to love You and hurt by You,
Than loving someone else,
But not You..

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-01-28 06:11 PM

Nice poem. I like it.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

2 posted 2009-01-28 07:10 PM

Enjoyed....

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