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Teen Poetry #9

Haven't Laughed So Hard

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2009-08-02 12:42 PM

I can't remember the last time
I laughed so hard.

It wasn't during a comedy
where the only purpose
is to make you laugh.

It wasn't when someone
told a crude,
inappropriate joke.

It wasn't when the class clown
pulled one
his stupid stunts.

I can't remember the last time
I laughed so hard.

It wasn't when listening
to a crazy
spoof song.

It wasn't while I was reading
cheesy pickup-lines
off the internet.

I can't remember the last time
I laughed so hard.

No. It wasn't any of those.

It was with my friends,
laughing so hard
it hurt.

Because I couldn't take
that
Stupid picture!!!

arabesque
Junior Member

since 2009-07-26

Posts 14
USA

1 posted 2009-08-02 01:11 AM

Hahaha this happens with my friends too. We try to get that perfect picture, but we never do. And we end up posting them all with the title "picture attempt -insert#here-" :p But awesome poem! Very cute :)

Forever,
Arabesque<3

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

2 posted 2009-08-21 02:54 AM

Wow, this was well done! Haha, I loved how u listed not wat made u laugh, (not right away) but things that usually do. It really made me wonder just wat it was that cracked u up so much! Pretty much all of ur examples described things that most ppl (including me) find amusing.

U really got me at the end, when it turned out to be something simple. Simple, but enough to make me laugh.

Haha, great job!

There is power in the pen.

UNTAMEDelegance
Member

since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

3 posted 2009-08-22 01:11 AM

Assasin_of_verse,
I find those things amusing as well, but when I was trying to take the picture I was laughing so hard that I couldn't breathe and it struck me as important that something so simple as that could make me laugh SOOO freakin' hard. (the pictures where really cery funny. In one it accidentally looked like me friends sister was about to beat my little sister over the head with a piece of paper!=^.^=)
~UNTAMEDelegance

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