Teen Poetry #9 |
Just an Ordinary Girl |
UNTAMEDelegance Member
since 2009-05-30
Posts 222Oregon |
Walking down the hall no one looks at me. The other girls are beautiful. I'm nothing much to see. The other girls have boys and phone and clothes and hair. I'm alone and they all act like no one's even there. I don't have a gorgeous body or beauty of any real kind, but you'd think someone would look at me instead of just passing on by. So I thought I'd try to be stylish. Give being pretty a whirl, But nobody even batted an eye. Okay. I give up. I guess I'm just An ordinary girl. |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
So it's lucky that the world is full of ordinary boys. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I really love this poem. I'm gonna put this one in the my library. Keep writing. Your pretty good at it. -Zach "Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
Melissa not everyone may notice you but thats there loss you are an amazing beautiful Young lady and I miss you so much The number one thing in acting is honesty: If you can fake that you've got it made. |
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something meaningful Junior Member
since 2009-07-17
Posts 12Wisconsin, USA |
i can totaly relate to this poem which makes it mean alot to me. i like it alot!! its well written too. |
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precious pearls Member
since 2009-07-24
Posts 110NJ; United States |
OMG when I read this, I was staring at it with my mouth open! It's like, I feel this way exactly some of the time, but I could never figure out how to express it! It rang with so much emotion and hurt and just the TRUTHFULNESS of your feelings! It was beautiful. And it wasn't beautiful because of the natural way the poem flowed, it was beautiful because of the honesty in your words! I think you should definetly take a bow for this one! Always, |
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