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life will go on
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life will go on |
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Love_Skull Junior Member
since 2008-07-15
Posts 44 |
I wont let go I've known that since the start But i want to let you know What your in for from my part All ive been through Everything is wrong But just to let yu know, to Life will go on You'll get through the sadness You'll get through the pain But you will eventually get through this Though it might not end as quickly as it came Whatever in your life that happened to go wrong I know you'll pull through Because life will go on You just have to figure out how to get through it all, to ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ I think im going to write more of this poem, but i cant think of what to write next right know. i really hope you like it and i will take any criticism that you want to write. Leah Stonis |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
A good write it is... But if you would be kind enough to explain the line-"What your in for from my part" And also... It would be nice if you could go a little deeper into the poem... like maybe describe what exactly it is that you have been through... And also what it is that makes you'll go seperate ways...If im not wrong is that what you mean-going your own ways? |
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Love_Skull Junior Member
since 2008-07-15
Posts 44 |
what i meant when i said "what your in for from my part" was whats coming from me. what made us go our separate ways was that she died, my cousin. |
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priyanka Member
since 2009-06-15
Posts 216india |
This might be too late for a reply, but saw your post just now. Havn't here for a while. I'm sorry for loss. Hope you doing fine now. Take care. |
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