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Love_Skull Junior Member
since 2008-07-15
Posts 44 |
C H A N G E S something bound to happen P A I N something you are bound to endure S A C R I F I C E something you are willing to do D O U B T something bound to cross your mind L O V E something you run into head first H O P E something you are willing to let happen J O Y something that comes and ends P E A C E something not fond of many people O P P O S I T E S something that easily attracts P R O M I S E S something bound to be broken T E A R S something that will eventually fall unwillingly from your eyes F I G H T S something easily one, but easily lost D R E A M S something that lies inside your head, carved into a thought M E M O R I E S something that brings us both joy and heartache H A P P I N E S S something that can pass by in a mere second or last for hours S O R R O W something you cant live without L O S S something of and experience that will come F E A R something that everyone experiences P I E C E S something that my life is made up of D I F F E R E N T something with many meanings N O R M A L something no person in this world is W O R T H L E S S something that you may think you are, but arent U N I Q U E something every one is; no one can change who you are but you written by: leah stonis |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
This is good. i know you didn't encourage critics but may I say one thing? I think that if you took the "something"s out it would flow a lot easier If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either. |
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