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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2009-06-16 02:41 AM

Now here's a little story
about a girl who played a game
her methods always varied
but her intentions were the same

She was just another pretty face
and every guy fell for her lies
who knows maybe she did care
or it was just an innocent disguise

one by one she hurt them
until one day she met a man
the one she always dreamed of
and he even had a tan

she never thought he'd hurt her
but he had another plan in mind
he gave her a dose of her own medicine
skipped town, left her behind

now back to playing her game
nothing changed nothing learned
but now she's on a defense
just in case the tables turned

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-06-16 09:43 PM

This is sooo good! Better then what I would write. :}

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

priyanka
Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 216
india

2 posted 2009-06-18 08:18 AM

WOW!!! that was real good... but sad the guy left

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

3 posted 2009-06-18 07:26 PM

I really like this, it's very good and it flowed nicely

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

4 posted 2009-06-18 09:32 PM

Ahhhhhhhhhhh it's great!!!!!! Though, sad she didn't learn. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww I missed you soooooooo!

-Love,
Kate

"What are you!?"
"I'm complicated."

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

5 posted 2009-06-19 12:23 PM

Hunnie. That. Was. Amazing.

Library.

To fly is to fall and miss the sidewalk
-Douglas Adams

LittleWillow
Member

since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

6 posted 2009-06-19 02:18 PM

This is great!
love the way it flowed.
& what the poem was about.

Very good!

xxx

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

7 posted 2009-06-20 06:39 PM

a sad story, but one that is seen all to often in today's generation.
you wrote it well, with perfect rhyme and flow.

meganne_77
Junior Member

since 2009-04-15

Posts 14
Oklahoma

8 posted 2009-06-21 05:38 PM

wow i loved that.. good rhythm... good job

-meg-

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