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Teen Poetry #9
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kindredspirit
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since 2009-05-19
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0 posted 2009-06-08 04:36 PM

painting you with love
moonlit decisions expose plain truth
while words on paper speak in louder tones
ink bleeding into white fiber
the whimsical curve of your lips
gracefully meets my vulnerabilities
like a pen tracing the exposed lines of a notebook
creating a melody that only we can sing.
© Copyright 2009 Kara Fohner - All Rights Reserved
freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12
Posts 704
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1 posted 2009-06-18 06:54 PM

I really like this!

The hardest part about writing poetry,
is trying not to write like everyone else.
kindredspirit
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since 2009-05-19
Posts 156
2 posted 2009-06-20 06:40 PM

Thank you!!
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