Memories That Still Remain.

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Teen Poetry #9

Memories That Still Remain.

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2009-06-06 07:15 PM

The black and white memories
Dance gracefully across my mind
Lost within the smoke screen thoughts
All those questions left to find

A longing feeling buried
Within a chamber called my heart
I see every kiss we shared together
Beautiful like any lost art

That simple quiet feeling
When you hold my hand
I believe it was called "love"
A feeling we can't withstand

Vague memories still remain
Too far to actually grasp
To think you might have be the one
That forever we could last

But the lost secrets we promised
Is now the song in my head
The cheerful laughter you sang
Makes my heart feel like lead

And..

I never saw it coming
I'll ignore all my tear's stains
But something that can't get off my mind
Are the memories that still remain
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I don't really like this one.. Sorta took a lot for me to write this.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2009-06-06 08:49 PM

pfft...seriously?!?!? this is amazing, i personally think this is one of your best. there's just something about it that just speaks out to me.
library.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2009-06-06 08:51 PM

and are you freakin serious?!?!? you got moderator???? wow, thats awesome!! congratulations!!!!
(srry, just had to add that.)

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

the_inner_me11
Junior Member

since 2009-05-12

Posts 15

3 posted 2009-06-06 11:18 PM

This was really good.. Quite amazing actually. I feel like i can somewhat relate.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2009-06-07 02:59 PM

Lol Yes Julianna ,I got moderator. :} And thanks for the comment.

Inner_Me Thanks as well.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

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