Teen Poetry #9 |
Memories That Still Remain. |
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
The black and white memories Dance gracefully across my mind Lost within the smoke screen thoughts All those questions left to find A longing feeling buried Within a chamber called my heart I see every kiss we shared together Beautiful like any lost art That simple quiet feeling When you hold my hand I believe it was called "love" A feeling we can't withstand Vague memories still remain Too far to actually grasp To think you might have be the one That forever we could last But the lost secrets we promised Is now the song in my head The cheerful laughter you sang Makes my heart feel like lead And.. I never saw it coming I'll ignore all my tear's stains But something that can't get off my mind Are the memories that still remain -------------------------------------------------- I don't really like this one.. Sorta took a lot for me to write this. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
pfft...seriously?!?!? this is amazing, i personally think this is one of your best. there's just something about it that just speaks out to me. library. julianna |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
and are you freakin serious?!?!? you got moderator???? wow, thats awesome!! congratulations!!!! (srry, just had to add that.) julianna |
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the_inner_me11 Junior Member
since 2009-05-12
Posts 15 |
This was really good.. Quite amazing actually. I feel like i can somewhat relate. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Lol Yes Julianna ,I got moderator. :} And thanks for the comment. Inner_Me Thanks as well. -Zach "Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley |
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