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Dreamy Reality |
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the_inner_me11 Junior Member
since 2009-05-12
Posts 15 |
This is my first post.. ever. Tell me what you think. In my dreams your mine to hold, I don't have to stand out from the crowd or be bold. Your my sweetie, my baby, my lovely love I don't have to compete with anyone, I'm always put above. Your with me when I feel alone and scared, I don't have to be brave and do everything I'm dared. But in reality your not mine to claim, I have to wait in line for you to say my name. Your not my boo, my sugar, the love of my life I have to wait like your someone else's wife. Your not there when I cry and lie by myself, I have to suffer like a dusty forgotten book on a shelf. If I lived in my dreams life would be great, But I live in reality where the farthest thing from kind is my fate. [This message has been edited by the_inner_me11 (06-04-2009 09:15 PM).] |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
Welcome to Passions  It's great to see you posting here . I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses. Hopefully we can all learn and enjoy together. (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting). All the best. Rob - Moderator/Passions in Poetry |
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nehematala Member
since 2009-05-21
Posts 129 |
This is really good If your parents never had children, chances are you won't, either. |
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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31Terrell,Texas |
It touched my heart. I started crying keep on writing. We are all unique in Jesus' eyes. |
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the_inner_me11 Junior Member
since 2009-05-12
Posts 15 |
Thank youso much. I wasnt really sure how it would go over but im very happy you liked it. |
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