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HersheyKiss
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since 2008-06-02
Posts 137
New Jersey

0 posted 2009-06-03 08:17 PM



Kick Me When I'm Down:

Swing your foot and kick me down,
Watch me fall right to the ground,
Smirk that smirk then turn around,
Leave me there without a sound.

Just kick me when I'm feeling low,
To the bottom of the sea I go,
Laugh that laugh I so well know,
Turn away from my pitiful show.

Kick me when I'm at my worst,
Make my hopeful bubble burst,
Strut that strut that has me cursed,
Don't just leave, destroy me first.

Kick me till I'm blue and black,
Tie me to the railroad track,
Leer that leer and take me back,
Then kick me till you see me crack.

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1 posted 2009-06-04 02:50 PM


I;ve sure had a few bubbles burst myself in my lifetime that is for sure.   The answer truly is to let it be "their stuff," take the positive you learn from the experience so you don't do it again, then move on.

Carpe' Diem,
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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
2 posted 2009-06-05 02:11 AM


Danii.. I Love You.. I Feel Like This Sooooo Much At The Momment.. If Only i Could put it into words
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