Teen Poetry #9 |
the fools disguise |
Leanne <3 Member
since 2007-08-25
Posts 216N.S.W, Australia |
He caught her eye As she danced with her friends Swaying her hips to the rhythm the beat the chaos of the bodies that bled her dry intrigued from the start he fixed his gaze on her And she lured him in With her eyes her lips her perfect tousled hair That could break his heart Hands guiding up her thighs With a cheeky little laugh Seducing him with temptation The dress The heels The jewels of the wealthy that fool all the guys Then without fret He got up from his seat And started walking her way He walked And walked And kept on walking Till he had passed her Then He turned back to her and said You know you may just be The loneliest girl I’ve ever met. Inside this exterior, over which the eye might have roved there was the record of a pulsing life, which had learnt too well for its years – Thomas Har |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Awww.. I liked it all till the ending. Sorta sad at the end but still good. Great to have you back. -Zach "Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley |
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kindredspirit Member
since 2009-05-19
Posts 156 |
wow, this is amazing! i applaud you. |
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