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UNTAMEDelegance
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since 2009-05-30

Posts 222
Oregon

0 posted 2009-05-30 02:50 AM

Sacred silence
Thought profound
That rests upon
My every sound
And seeks to silence
All my fears
and cease the flood
Of swelling tears

Tender tear-fall
Soft caress
Night-wind breezes
Halt distress
And send me things
To ponder through
And leave me pondering
To the blue

Silence sacred
Profound thought
Will catch the wind
That can't be caught
Then soft I rest
In forest glade
In light of moonbeams'
Silver shade

JenniferMaxwell

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since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

1 posted 2009-05-30 08:10 AM

Welcome to PiP, Melissa!

Some very lovely images in your poem.

"Then soft I rest
In forest glade
In light of moonbeams'
Silver shade"

Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2009-05-30 10:44 AM

Welcome to Pip!! This poem right here is really good, if I do say so myself. Great imagery. Keep up the work.

-Zach

"Who are you to judge the life I live? I know I'm not perfect" - Bob Marley

moonbeam

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since 2005-12-24

Posts 2356

3 posted 2009-05-30 12:35 PM

Welcome to Passions

It's great to see you posting here . I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses. Hopefully we can all learn and enjoy together. (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting).

All the best.

Rob - Moderator/Passions in Poetry

nehematala
Member

since 2009-05-21

Posts 129

4 posted 2009-05-30 01:58 PM

Hey girl you've outdone yourself again in this poem!!!! good work

[This message has been edited by nehematala (05-31-2009 12:22 AM).]

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

5 posted 2009-05-30 02:36 PM

Welcome to Pip!!!

What a wonderful first post!

Can't wait to read more!

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2009-05-30 10:05 PM

Melissa,

Welcome to Passions!

I think your "teen" words will soon become "Open Forum" words. This would have fit as well there, as here.

But be comfortable, post where you wish, and I am looking forward to reading more from you pen!

Welcome to Passions!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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