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the dark night after the bright morning
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the dark night after the bright morning |
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Zaineb Junior Member
since 2009-05-22
Posts 27Denmark |
The dark night after the bright morning We are in middle in December And snow is coming soon The first snow of the year But no one seems to care Because after bright morning There is a dark night With a small please, there is a big sorrow And so is it the other way round The please don’t count As long as the sorrow is near Because after the bright morning There is a dark night Too busy to notice the white snow We only see the dark around Why do we forget please? Why don’t we see other things then the dark night in sight The white snow is outside It only comes ones in a year. I ask now Why do we only think about the dark night After the bright morning |
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moonbeam
since 2005-12-24
Posts 2356 |
This is nicely written. Maybe you should think about submitting it here: http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2009/may/19/john-siddique-poetry-workshop |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Hmm good metaphoric. I like it.  -Zach I love my crayons. :D lol |
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