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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2009-01-10 08:31 PM

yeah..so this is a song i wrote over the Christmas break and it's not entirely finished yet..like i need a title so..yeah, anywho..here it is:

You walk past her in the halls,
no one seems to see her at all,
and there's one thing
that you should know,
she's no angel.
There's no light,
There's no time,
she's alone.

There's a house but there's no home,
she's got some friends
but she's still alone.
And there's no one to say goodbye to,
so she's gone.

We could have stopped her,
we should have saved her,
she wasn't alone.

And there's no one to say goodbye to,
no one to help her get through.
There's no light,
there's no time,
so she's gone.

{~~*~~}

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-01-10 08:41 PM

Awwwwwww.. this poems sad but good. I'd call it... "Fading, Fading, She's gone"

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

2 posted 2009-01-14 05:07 PM

emma lee, you have to teach me to play that on piano, every time i read it it makes me want to hear it, but i cant unless ur here!!! argh. srry i cant help u with a title, i always suck at those.
<3 ya hun,
!tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2009-01-15 01:32 AM

Emmi Hunni.. I love ur song... It's amazing.. Your amazing... Be Strong Pretty Girl... I'll Carry You When You Get Tired

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2009-01-15 07:57 PM

Thanks Jess, and i know you will.

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
{~~*~~}

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

5 posted 2009-01-16 08:42 AM

Wow this is GREAT!!! I really love this one emma.
~~Adreanna Leigh

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

6 posted 2009-01-16 07:09 PM

great song! loved it, wish i could hear the tune

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

wwzwlmd8
Member

since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

7 posted 2009-01-17 07:13 PM

i love this song can't what to hear more

~Indya

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