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Teen Poetry #9

I met you in a story

Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
Junior Member

since 2009-05-03

Posts 31
Terrell,Texas

0 posted 2009-05-18 09:08 PM

I met you in a story,
Upon an autumn's eve,
We built a treetop hideout,
Among the russet trees.

I met you in a story,
Upon a snowy morn,
We wreathed a deer in holly,
And feed him sweet white corn.

I met you in a story,
Upon a summer's night,
We took your sloop exploring,
Through seas of silver light.

I met you in a story,
Upon a rainy day,
We rode on armored stallions,
Into the battle fray.

I met you in a story
And friend I do believe
I'll met you in that treetop hideout
Another autumn's eve.

We are all unique in Jesus' eyes.

Kalysta
Junior Member

since 2009-04-02

Posts 41
Ohio

1 posted 2009-05-18 09:16 PM

Really good write. It is different than what you normally write, I keep an eye out for your writing. I particulary like it. Anyways great job. I like it a lot!!!

~Kalysta~

~Kalysta~

freeand2sexy
Senior Member

since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2009-05-18 09:38 PM

Very good!!! I think this is your best so far.

The tips of my fingers
Start to bleed the thoughts
That overwhelm me

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