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lovelyswagg14
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since 2009-05-17
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0 posted 2009-05-17 03:47 PM




Go on carry on with the pretending
Pretending to fall in love
Pretending to be my friend
Pretending to care
And be there for me

Im sick and tired of it all
You said we would still talk
But all we do is walk
And silently dream of better things

Hoping for a new beginning
I search the sky for answers
I can't  see much
As my eyes blur up
And watery crystals fall down

Forming a puddle of depression
Im not making much progression
The anger i have towards you makes me sad
I dont see why you ignore me now
When its you who caused my pain

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1 posted 2009-05-17 04:00 PM


Welcome to Passions

It's great to see you posting here.   I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses.  Hopefully we can all learn and enjoy together.  (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting).

All the best.

Rob - Moderator/Passions in Poetry

nehematala
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since 2009-05-21
Posts 129

2 posted 2009-06-01 08:49 PM


wow this is good

If you don't like something,
Change it...
If you can't change it,
Change the way you think about it

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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3 posted 2009-06-01 11:07 PM


But all we do is walk
And silently dream of better things

~*~

Now...this is poetry

When one doesn't let go, but walks on
even if in silence.

Welcome to Passions!

I look forward to reading more of your works!



" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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