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It's me again and again
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It's me again and again |
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KatVern17 Junior Member
since 2009-05-07
Posts 33 |
Something I wrote because I felt alone. And I was writing it as if I was talking to my sisters. It’s me again and again I’m here Just like I said I would be Forever and ever When it’s dark And you’re scared I’ll be there; When you’re sad And feeling down I’ll be there; When you want to talk I promise you I’ll be there It’s me again and again I’ll be here I’ll be there Just like I said I would be I’ll be where you need me I might not be there in person But I’ll be there in sprit I won’t leave you No matter how much you hate me I promise you I’ll be there You can trust me As much as I trust you So here I’ll give you a hug Just an “I’m here” hug You need it And so do I It’s me again and again I won’t do what he has done I’m here to stay I won’t walk away Yes, I’ll listen You can talk It’s me again and again I’m here Just like I said I would be Forever and ever Promise you Promise that I’ll be there Forever and ever And that I’ll never leave It's me again and again I'm here Just like I said I would be Forever and ever I'm not gonna leave For it's me again and again I'm here to stay I'm not gonna leave I love you with all my heart |
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SarahJoyScott Junior Member
since 2011-01-13
Posts 16Finland |
This is such a strong poem, very intens! It got me by surprise. I was listening emotional music, while reading this poem, and I actualy started to cry. Your words do so much to me in this poem. You are very strong with words! I CANNOT believe this didn't get any replies yet! It's beautiful! This is a real piece of work  Sarah |
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KatVern17 Junior Member
since 2009-05-07
Posts 33 |
Thanks Sarah. I learned how powerful my words were when I was young. I've grown and now my poems show how much power. Thank you for commenting. |
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SarahJoyScott Junior Member
since 2011-01-13
Posts 16Finland |
You're welcome |
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HolsJoscelyne Junior Member
since 2011-04-05
Posts 23Colchester, United Kingdom |
Nice use of repetition, though I'm not sure the 'and again' is necessary unless you used it as a ' and again -' to lead on like a 'for example' but it's so touching that you wrote a poem for your sister. x Holly Joscelyne poetry at dougthedreadpoetry.blogspot.com |
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KatVern17 Junior Member
since 2009-05-07
Posts 33 |
I used the "and again" as if im never leaving. because of the family issues. |
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