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half this half that you know what forget it |
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KatVern17 Junior Member
since 2009-05-07
Posts 33 |
this is a poem i wrote because of the things i have been going through. there is nothing that i can do to make it stop. Half awake Half asleep Half alive Half dead But the pain remains Nothing can be done Nothing that I can do Sit back and let the work be done But nothing will stop What he has done Half awake Half asleep Half alive Half dead But the pain remains See see See what I mean Hear listen Watch the TV Nothing is being done As more and more comes The pain will never be relieved Oh me Oh my I hear thy cry Sister Brother Mother Friends And neighbors Come to thy side And tell me what can be done Half awake Half asleep Half alive Half dead But the pain must remain What to do When nothing can be done When I hear thy cry I hope he sees What he’s done Family together Family apart My family will never be the same Brick be my friend Brick that I punch Brick I’m sorry for the things I’ve done But nothing else can be done Run Hide The darkness is where I’ll be For thy comfort Hear my scream Hear my cry Listen by my side But nothing I see Can be done Half awake Half asleep Half alive And half dead But the pain is here to remain He likes her But loves another One that pulled my family apart One that destroyed all She must go Far away from the family She had destroyed Oh no She won’t stop Tearing apart the good families |
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Kalysta Junior Member
since 2009-04-02
Posts 41Ohio |
Hey this was really good. It seems as though your going through a really ruff time right now. But you have to remember that it will eventually get better. But i find that when im upset i feel better when i write in my journal or write a poem. Even if you dont share it, youll still feel much better. But anyways this was a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it. =-D ~Kalysta~ |
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KatVern17 Junior Member
since 2009-05-07
Posts 33 |
Thanks..I felt real good after writing this, and then felt even better after having someone read it. |
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