Teen Poetry #9 |
My Story - i'm letting go, i told someone |
Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
Please don't take this down!!! It's a story of renewall, and freedom, and joy!!! It's a story of learning to get over things, and finally feel free. thanks. ______________________________________________________________________ From what you see, you don't have the right, the right to judge me. You don't know who I am, or what I've done. It all started two years ago, as people began to talk. Nothing ended, it just got worse. Then suddenly, I was left alone. n u m b c o l d g o n e a l o n e f o r g o t t e n I needed to do something, so I turned to a knife. This was the desperate plee, to someone who'd listen... too bad there was no one. For weeks..months this went on, until something clicked, and I broke free. I told the truth to a stranger, now lets hope this will help. f r e e d o m j o y l o v e p e a c e h o p e So here I am, waiting for the next step. Will you help me? Will you love me? I'm ready to move on, I just need a helping hand. julianna |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this doesn't glorify cutting honey... it does show great strength, and if this is about you, and you told someone, then I'm really happy for you! It's one step at a time, and it's learning to deal with the pain other than in a self destructive way. hang in there. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
thanks SEA for your support, it means alot to me. julianna |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I'm sorry to hear about your pain Julianna. This was a very well written freewrite. I hope that things get better for you. It's been a while since we spoke, I'd appreciate you letting me know how you're doing. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Julianna, There's something about your words that touch the heart of everyone who reads. I don't know what it is but I feel really sorry for all that you've been through. But I'm glad that I was there to cheer up some of those days. Take your mind away form it just for a split second and make you laugh. -Zach I love my crayons. :D lol |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
haha, yes, thank you so much zach...i'll always be singing my song julianna |
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Rosie_Orange Junior Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 46South Africa |
I'm sorry you had such a rough time, i'm really happy you got through it all! brilliant poem... it was so honest xx Love, Peace, Chocolate *mmmmmm* |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
thanks Rosie_Orange, I'm glad that I have your support as well...it really does mean alot to me. julianna |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This is a great poem that explores the use of alternatives some people take before finally getting on the right track. If this is about you, all I have to say is here's a hug for you, and I am sure you realize now that nothing is gained from this type of path. ((hugs)) to you if it is. Great job on your poem. Carpe' Diem, |
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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31Terrell,Texas |
Thank you,it's about time someone put this pain into words.I told somebody, too.Maybe we'll get better together. -Sacha |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
yay sacha!!!! thats so exciting! i'm glad you did too julianna |
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