Teen Poetry #9 |
Going, Going, g o n e |
Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
I'm left with the pain, of knowing you're gone. I have nothing left... nothing left to live for. Where will this leave me? I don't know anymore, I simply don't k n o w. This knowledge of being sane has left my living soul. It was erased with the thought of how you dissapeared. Clutching the air before me, for someone to hold my hand... for someone to love me. But I know that's a lie, you were all I had left. julianna |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Argh... this is so good.. it hurts me to read it.. cause i feel like this everyday!!.. it's insaine.. i know exactly how u feel.. AMAZING! |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
thanks so much julianna |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Another beautiful heartrender. Your free-writes keep getting better Julianna. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
thanks luke. i'm glad you see that julianna |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Aww hon. You know how much this poem prolly means. Because I know that everyone has felt this at least once in their life. Keep up the writing please -Zach We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion. |
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Just.Another.Falling.Star Member
since 2008-05-08
Posts 422Canada |
haha, i will zach. don't you worry about that one julianna |
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