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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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0 posted 2009-04-12 11:44 PM


I'm left with the pain,
of knowing you're gone.
I have nothing left...
nothing left to live for.
Where will this leave me?
I don't know anymore,
I simply don't k n o w.
This knowledge of being sane
has left my living soul.
It was erased with the thought
of how you dissapeared.
Clutching the air before me,
for someone to hold my hand...
for someone to love me.
But I know that's a lie,
you were all I had left.

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

© Copyright 2009 Julianna - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
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1 posted 2009-04-13 09:45 AM


Argh... this is so good..
it hurts me to read it.. cause i feel like this everyday!!.. it's insaine.. i know exactly how u feel..

AMAZING!

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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2 posted 2009-04-13 09:54 AM


thanks so much

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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Stafford England
3 posted 2009-04-13 01:29 PM


Another beautiful heartrender.

Your free-writes keep getting better Julianna.

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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4 posted 2009-04-13 02:18 PM


thanks luke. i'm glad you see that

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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5 posted 2009-04-14 03:03 PM


Aww hon. You know how much this poem prolly means. Because I know that everyone has felt this at least once in their life. Keep up the writing please

-Zach

We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion.  

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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6 posted 2009-04-14 04:58 PM


haha, i will zach. don't you worry about that one

julianna

.:.:~]you clicked your heals and wished for me[~:.:.

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