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soul_wandering
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0 posted 2009-04-11 01:39 AM



Listen to your heart&gaze at the skies,
Scare away the shadows with light in your eyes.

Dazzle in the dark,dance in the rain,
Sing in the shower,smile in the pain.

Unlatch your heart,fire the fringe.
Deflate your ego,curb the cringe.

Burn the logic,bend the law
Feed the faith,sharpen the saw.

A kick in the ass or a punch in the nose,
Jittery jerks can't make you morose.

Let them sting or push till you fall,
Jump ur even higher,love for all.

Laugh till you cry& cry till you laugh,
Get a life,write your own epitaph.

Do what you must,let 'em scoff and scorn,
Wake up to a new morning with every dawn.

Call me loony or call me carefree,
I give a damn folks,thats incorrigible me!

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1 posted 2009-04-11 10:20 AM


Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!!!!!



This is a great start to your time with us. I truly enjoyed it.

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting.

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2 posted 2009-04-12 07:49 AM


awesome rhyming keep it up and i hope you enjoy passions

I'm lost and going nowhere i need help to find my way

freeand2sexy
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3 posted 2009-04-14 04:35 PM


Welcome to pip!!!

I like how you used alliteration. Nice write!

"I can't see my forehead!" -Patrick

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